This is (by far) my favourite sound clip in the entire project! All the sound generated from this point was created on Deadline day. This meant 2 things. 1, my time management was lacking to the point where I'm doing a huge amount of work at the last minute. And 2, I am at my most experience as of this project. This was the point where my voice and sound experienced is at it's best. This meant that my voice was less flat, less monotone and much stronger in emotion. All the issues were solved or at least reduced in these clips, clear evidence of progression and development. The ironic thing is, the diary was created as a failed backstory attempt (the 1st draft) near the very start of the project. The failed diary became the script for this recording. I recycled old material/mistakes and turned it into something new. The diary entry became a part of and contributed greatly into the final interactive. For all those people who mocked me at the start about how this isn't a backstory, I STATE MY CASE. In this voice clip, I document past events that shaped my character into who he is today. Instead of a random person talking about the Doctor, the audience experience his past in HIS perspective. HIS view and opinions and emotions. This wouldn't of worked without emotion and this time round I brought it. I portrayed the anger discovered earlier, the bitterness of being portrayed, the obsession and hate. If anything I used the "lack of emotion issue" at the start and flipped it on it's head. The character was originally intended to be emotionless, heartless and extremely logical/cold. I introduce him as that but let more and more emotion creep into his voice as the events go on. To the point of breaking point and finally the collapse, this also provides some much needed range to keep the audience engaged. Positively, it fixes many of the issues stated before (as said above). In terms of the negative, the biggest would be the shift. The Doctor in the room acts completely differently to the Doctor on the disc. Depending on the order it could jar the audience, disconnect them or confuse them in who the Plague Doctor truly is. This could be seen as good or bad depending on how you interpret it. If I was to do this again, I would adjust the Diary to better suit the development of the character (as my project continued). Being created early on, there are many small areas that won't quite line up. I would of edited the script for a better sync of the current, given the time. The greatest negative in all this would be my patients and time management. Due to how late into my deadline I am (90min left as of writing this), many areas have been scrambled together. This of course would of had an impact on the quality. Much of the research, experiments and ideas are already created. However most of the actual sound clips remained unfinished tell the final day of work. If I had to do this all over again (or later project in general), I would allocate more time for my writeup, sudden issues and a day to patch up any unexpected holes. I feel like due to my time constraint, some of my areas will be lacking, not to their full potential or accidently missed entirely. Overall I am still happy with the result, I just wished I let myself have more time.